I’ve talked about beginnings of novels
before but recently I’ve seen a few articles on a different angle and had
someone ask me how beginnings have changed over the eons of writing. Had
another someone, reading an Ebook, comment he didn’t have time to read works
like War and Peace because its length depended mainly on long introductions and
pages and pages of description that goes on at length about a tilt of a head or
small gesture. (you might pop over to Em’s Talkery and
see the short video of writer/dancer Emily Frankel and actor John Cullum
discussing Tolstoy if you’re interested).
It got me to thinking, and reading, and
thinking some more.
Here’s the thing. Each way of writing is
correct for the era it’s written in. The old classics are mostly filled with
long descriptions, some with flowery prose, and the like. It was a different
time. And it lingered that way for quite a while. The writer would feed the
reader a whole backstory right in the beginning to set the stage. They’d
provide lots of description to give a feel for place and time.
Then along came big changes. First films
came into being. They leaned heavily on literature for input and method during
their infancy.
But things kept changing. Stories got
tighter. One script page equals about one minute on screen. Stories had to fit
into a timeframe.
And that’s not all. People began living
at a much faster pace. The movies weren’t the only ones evolving.
Novels, once the great influence on
movies were now being greatly influenced BY them.
Readers really are no longer interested
in long narratives at the beginning. In fact they don’t have time for them and
don’t like them.
The reader wants to be thrown right into
the story.
Because of that the writer must evolve
and adapt. Get the story moving already; backstory and description (minimal)
can be woven into the story as it moves forward. Just provide enough
information to trigger the reader’s imagination and that reader will fill in
many gaps.
The cover of a book and the first couple
of pages must grab the reader immediately or that Ebook gets passed over, the
hard copy book put back on the shelf. Last I read the cover gets about 3
seconds, the reading of the first page scant more before the prospective reader
makes a decision.
The same applies to script really. Those
first few lines better grab the reader or it gets tossed quickly aside.
People are reading on Ereaders, smart
phones, tablets and of course still in print. All modes are affected.
Writing and reading are evolving – have evolved
– and will continue to evolve. The smart writer keeps up with the times,
continuing to evolve with the reader. If you don’t. If you insist on writing in
the footsteps of Tolstoy or any of the great writers of bygone eras you risk
your book being put back on the shelf – that is, if it’s made it to publication
which right now would be doubtful unless you’ve published it yourself.
Yes, beginnings are changing, stories
are evolving, but I like it.
What about you?
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